支票重寄的没有收到，原来的那张收到了，怎么办？

支票重寄的没有收到，原来的那张收到了，怎么办？

英文信应该怎么写。谢谢

大概意思是说，前些天我申请了支票止付并且要求重发了 ，但是今天找到了原来的支票（重发的那张支票还没有收到），请问能不能把原来止付的支票重新激活，并把重发的那张支票止付？当然手续费用您可以在我账户里面扣除，谢谢

Hi there,
    I am sorry to trouble you again.The day before yesterday , I asked for sotping the paying cheque I have applied for
and requested another one. But fortunately, I received the first one unexpected today.So I appreciate that you can
active the first cheque and stop the second one. You can deduct the fee from my account if needed.
   best regards
  yours sincerely

Hi,
    I am sorry to trouble you again. Some days ago, I asked you to stop paying cheque I have applied for and requested another one. But fortunately, I happened to receive the first one today. So I appreciate that you can re-activate the first cheque and stop the second one. You can deduct the fee from my account if needed.

Best regards
Yours Sincerely

[[i] 本帖最后由 Pando 于 2008-3-11 13:32 编辑 [/i]]

[quote]原帖由 [i]一路收刀[/i] 于 2008-3-10 13:35 发表 [url=http://u8881.com/discuz/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2858419&ptid=428296][img]http://u8881.com/discuz/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
Hi there,
    I am sorry to trouble you again.The day before yesterday , I asked for [color=red]sotping[/color] the paying cheque [color=red]I have[/color] applied for
and requested another one. But fortunately, I received the fir ... [/quote]

真是晕死，给人写信，至少拼写注意一些吧。

还有那个时态，过去时后面套用现在完成时，厉害，高，实在是高！佩服，佩服！

回复 #4 光光熊 的帖子

估计是没注意...呵呵```

[quote]原帖由 [i]一路收刀[/i] 于 2008-3-10 13:35 发表 [url=http://www.u8881.com/discuz/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2858419&ptid=428296][img]http://www.u8881.com/discuz/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
Hi there,
    I am sorry to trouble you again.The day before yesterday , I asked for sotping the paying cheque I have applied for
and requested another one. But fortunately, I received the fir ... [/quote]


The day before yesterday 这句话不能用在这里. 比如美国人凡是在, 以后都会空一格, 这样才能表示尊敬.

bao_46

给一个修改过的版本，应该没有什么语法错误，请参考

To whom it may concern:
    I've just received the 1st check before the 2nd one which is still on the way. Could you re-activate the 1st one and stop the 2nd so that I can cash it ASAP. All possible cost please charge from my account. Thank you for your help.

Yours sincerely
xxx

[quote]原帖由 [i]angelsp[/i] 于 2008-4-2 02:03 发表 [url=http://www.u8881.com/discuz/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=2892503&ptid=428296][img]http://www.u8881.com/discuz/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
给一个修改过的版本，应该没有什么语法错误，请参考

To whom it may concern:
    I've just received the 1st check before the 2nd one which is still on the way. Could you re-activate the 1st one a ... [/quote]

thank you for you help 这里语法错误了。 可以用 thanks for your help 或者 thank you for your help